Thursday, 20 November 2014

Treatment for Script Idea

LOGLINE: Will Taylor is an up and coming writer who has recently received a book deal, unable to get a spark of creativity; Will searches for a new source of inspiration. After the murder of his neighbor, Will’s interest and determination to write a book lead him on dangerous path, as he looks closer at the murder. Hell bent on been accurate and getting the facts for his story, Will gains the suspicion of not only the police, but also the murderer.


Act One

Will Taylor is lying in bed listening to music through his earphones, his bedroom hasn’t been cleaned in a number of days, judging by the clothes on the floor and the plates and bowls that are stacking up by his bed. Will begins lip syncing to the song while trying to start his new novel, with his hands struggling to type actual words on his computer, Will begins to get angry and tears out his earphones and throws them across the room.

Will takes a deep breath and attempts at typing his story again, not long after he begins writing his phone starts ringing, it’s his agent. Will ignores the call and turns back to continue his work when he receives a text, the text is a threat telling him to answer the phone, the phone rings again and this time Will answers. A conversation takes place where the agent is asking Will about his progress on the book, Will lies and tells the agent what they want to hear but the agent knows Will is lying and yells at him to get it done. The now angry Will after been yelled out decides he is in no state or condition to write and calls his friend to meet up with him.

Will and his friend Eli are walking through a mall, Will starts to discuss his problem while Eli’s concentration keeps getting distracted. Will brings up this girl he likes and how after he’s done with the book he’ll have the time and money to win her over, Eli reveals that he has slept with the girl recently on a night out. Will’s temper rises and Eli tries to comfort him by saying he didn’t think Will would mind cause he was busy writing the book. The two arrive at a CafĂ© and discuss this conversation more.

Will returns home even more angry and upset then when he left and comes to the realization that every problem he has right now can be traced back to this book. He starts angrily typing about how his life sucks and is divided on weather he should call the girl he likes, knowing now that Eli has slept with her. Will falls asleep out of exhaustion at his desk.

Act Two

Will wakes up in the middle of the night to sirens and flashing lights, he goes outside to investigate and sees that his elderly neighbor has died. He talks to a police officer on the scene that tells him that she was murdered a few hours ago and discovered by the victims daughter, they believe this isn’t the first time this person has committed murder due to similarities with other recent murders. Will starts wondering why anyone would want to hurt his neighbor and describes her as harmless, Will begins to think of all the possible reasons and realizes he has found his inspiration. He races back to his room and begins writing his idea down. Will titles it “ The Diary of a Serial Killer”.

Morning arrives and Will is still at his desk and is just finishing off a huge portion of his book, pleased with what he has, Will calls his agent to tell them that they can expect the first draft by Monday. He sits back down to continue writing and realizes he has no idea how it is going to end, this angers Will again and he comes to the solution that he needs more facts and information about the case. He calls the police but they wont reveal anything about an on going investigation and then he calls Eli to help him break into the crime scene so he can have a look round, Eli tells him that he’s mad and not to do it, just when Will starts to agree he hears the voice of the girl he likes in the background of Eli’s phone, this triggers Will to go through with his plan.

Will sneaks in to the house at night via the back door after paying two homeless people to fight each other to divert the police officers attention who are watching the house. He looks through the house too see if there is anything useful to add to his story and then makes his way to the room she was killed in. Will sees the outline of where the body was found and the blood surrounding it, he searches the room and finds pictures of the deceased with her daughter, Will had never seen the daughter look so happy. Will immediately decides that his book will reveal the serial killer to be the victim’s daughter and races home to finish writing. With Will no longer at the crime scene, a dark figure emerges from the shadows.

Act Three

Will finishes his book and is proud of the ending and the twist his book has, he saves his work and is so excited to show his agent it on Monday. Will starts to feel cold and notices his window has been left open, he closes it and then goes of to bed and falls asleep almost instantly. Will awakens again in the middle of the night; he senses that someone else is in the room, fearing for his life he decides to stay completely still and it is revealed that the dark figure/killer is in the room with him. Will closes his eyes tight and wishes that nothing is there, he then quickly jumps out of bed and sees that the room is completely empty, he searches around to find that his window is open, a now confused and concerned Will returns to bed.


Will wakes up still chuffed at himself for completing the book and goes to his computer to print it out, he notices that the ending he wrote is now missing and has been deleted from his document, Will checks when the document was last saved and it says 2:03am last night which is impossible because Will was asleep.  Will hears a loud banging noise on his door and the police burst in, they restrain Will and see his story on his computer but to them it’s just a detailed explanation of a killer that they’re investigating. They tell Will that an anonymous tip told them he was involved and that the murder weapon is in his home, Will laughs and claims they made a mistake but suddenly quiets down when an officer walking’s in holding an award statue with dried blood on it, an officer says that this is the writing award the daughter said was missing from her mothers house. The lead investigator makes a remark about Will not been able to win his own award so he killed the victim for hers, Will is then taking downstairs and put inside a police car. Will hears yelling and turns around to find the daughter shouting “Bastard” at him, once she has Will’s attention she smiles at him proving Will’s story is true and then she continues to cry and yell. The police car drives off, taking Will away after been set up by the daughter.     

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