Filmmaking- Script

This is the finished completed shooting script, it contains all the story and narrative for the 30 second commercial and is the 3rd draft of the script. I feel like this is the strongest development and version of the script and includes the most detail and significant visual language to make the script better. It's also lost many unnecessary parts of the script and in many cases, useless scenes/details in the script. The characters names are now final, as well as the locations, so the actors as well as crew can take information and knowledge from the script to add to their performance and work on the shoot. I've personally timed the script as well as a group in our class during a lesson to make sure the script can be contained in 30 seconds for the commercial. We did a test were we mock filmed each scene to see how long each one will be and if all added together will be 30 seconds. I'm confident I can film mine and cut mine down to the 30 second mark for the kodak awards. I've included the finished version of the 'Go Together, Go Outdoors' script below: